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PoetryArchivesTooTheTome.PoetryArchivesToo HistoryHide minor edits - Show changes to markup August 06, 2007, at 02:28 PM
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like black gore to:
like black gore\\ Changed line 11 from:
splatters to:
splatters\\ Changed line 13 from:
the birthing blood to:
the birthing blood\\ Changed line 15 from:
clotting to:
clotting\\ Changed line 17 from:
quivering viscera to:
quivering viscera\\ Changed line 21 from:
the grim midwife to:
the grim midwife\\ Changed line 31 from:
i am mechanic to:
i am mechanic\\ Changed line 36 from:
electron bleed to:
electron bleed\\ Changed line 41 from:
sectors corrupt to:
sectors corrupt\\ Changed line 46 from:
meltdown begins to:
meltdown begins\\ Changed line 54 from:
to tell me your delusions to:
to tell me your delusions\\ Changed line 56 from:
lie to you so sweetly to:
lie to you so sweetly\\ Changed line 58 from:
that my illusions to:
that my illusions\\ Changed line 60 from:
your reality to:
your reality\\ Changed line 62 from:
that my conclusions to:
that my conclusions\\ Changed line 69 from:
i am hated to:
i am hated\\ Changed line 71 from:
incinerated to:
incinerated\\ Changed line 73 from:
segregated to:
segregated\\ Changed line 75 from:
subliminated to:
subliminated\\ Changed line 77 from:
(eliminated to:
(eliminated\\ Changed line 84 from:
this blacklighted freakling to:
this blacklighted freakling\\ Changed line 86 from:
and different from you to:
and different from you\\ Changed line 88 from:
at this small unique thing to:
at this small unique thing\\ Changed line 93 from:
this sparkling construction to:
this sparkling construction\\ Changed line 95 from:
cold and precise to:
cold and precise\\ Changed line 97 from:
intent on destruction to:
intent on destruction\\ Changed line 102 from:
this soulflesh delusion to:
this soulflesh delusion\\ Changed line 104 from:
so lost and abused to:
so lost and abused\\ Changed line 106 from:
deny this intrusion to:
deny this intrusion\\ Changed line 117 from:
as i prepare to thrash again to:
as i prepare to thrash again\\ Changed line 119 from:
and rage at the sun rising to:
and rage at the sun rising\\ Changed line 123 from:
as i prepare to fight again to:
as i prepare to fight again\\ Changed line 125 from:
and rage at the wrongs done to me to:
and rage at the wrongs done to me\\ Changed line 129 from:
as i prepare to create again to:
as i prepare to create again\\ Changed line 131 from:
and rage at the choices i must make to:
and rage at the choices i must make \\ Changed line 143 from:
with burning sugar to:
with burning sugar\\ Changed line 147 from:
in a heated bath to:
in a heated bath\\ Changed line 152 from:
loneliness walking to:
loneliness walking\\ Changed line 154 from:
i with bill in hand awake to:
i with bill in hand awake\\ Changed line 164 from:
echo through shattered skies to:
echo through shattered skies\\ Changed line 169 from:
tied to their marbled fists to:
tied to their marbled fists\\ Changed line 174 from:
scar bodies made of hay to:
scar bodies made of hay\\ Changed line 185 from:
Those thin blue veins just below the skin. to:
Those thin blue veins just below the skin.\\ Changed line 190 from:
Those scars on your wrists. to:
Those scars on your wrists.\\ Changed line 195 from:
Your eyes filled with such pain. to:
Your eyes filled with such pain.\\ Changed line 201 from:
You who sheds your pain with blood. to:
You who sheds your pain with blood.\\ Changed line 212 from:
Scalpel (my pen). to:
Scalpel (my pen).\\ Changed line 214 from:
It begins. to:
It begins.\\ Changed line 216 from:
Laid bare in their glory. to:
Laid bare in their glory.\\ Changed line 218 from:
For all to see. to:
For all to see.\\ Changed line 220 from:
Salt pearls of life. to:
Salt pearls of life.\\ Changed line 222 from:
A slip. to:
A slip.\\ Changed line 224 from:
A tear. to:
A tear.\\ Changed line 226 from:
Pumping to the rhythm of truth. to:
Pumping to the rhythm of truth.\\ Changed line 228 from:
Crawling. to:
Crawling.\\ Changed line 230 from:
Words appear. to:
Words appear.\\ Changed line 232 from:
Replaced by a silence. to:
Replaced by a silence.\\ Changed line 241 from:
dividing it into equal sections of sorrow. to:
dividing it into equal sections of sorrow.\\ Changed line 243 from:
through the windows there. to:
through the windows there.\\ Changed line 245 from:
but the mirror flings a grimace back at me. to:
but the mirror flings a grimace back at me.\\ Changed line 247 from:
crumbles to:
crumbles\\ Changed line 249 from:
falls. to:
falls.\\ Changed line 251 from:
engulfing me in its tide. to:
engulfing me in its tide.\\ Changed line 255 from:
I look down, to:
I look down,\\ Changed line 257 from:
I reach down, to:
I reach down,\\ Changed line 259 from:
And piece by piece to:
And piece by piece\\ Changed line 264 from:
I look up and my reflection to:
I look up and my reflection\\ Changed line 266 from:
I smile, to:
I smile,\\ Changed line 268 from:
to the glory of that smile. to:
to the glory of that smile.\\ Changed line 279 from:
Fuck it all to hell. to:
Fuck it all to hell.\\ Changed line 281 from:
Drain Blouberg strand. to:
Drain Blouberg strand.\\ Changed line 283 from:
Turn your back on the ill fated rand. to:
Turn your back on the ill fated rand.\\ Changed line 285 from:
Trust not the stranger. to:
Trust not the stranger.\ Changed line 287 from:
I put my faith in people. to:
I put my faith in people.\\ Changed line 289 from:
I loved this goddamn country. to:
I loved this goddamn country.\\ Changed line 293 from:
Drain Blouberg strand. to:
Drain Blouberg strand.\\ Changed line 295 from:
And turn your back on the ill fated rand. to:
And turn your back on the ill fated rand.\\ Changed line 297 from:
Trust not the steeple to:
Trust not the steeple\\ Changed line 299 from:
The rainbow nations tarnished. to:
The rainbow nations tarnished.\\ Changed line 301 from:
The thieves are all smiling. to:
The thieves are all smiling.\\ Changed line 305 from:
Drain Blouberg strand. to:
Drain Blouberg strand.\\ Changed line 307 from:
And turn your back on the ill fated rand. to:
And turn your back on the ill fated rand.\\ Changed line 316 from:
you watching to:
you watching\\ Changed line 318 from:
between two heartbeats to:
between two heartbeats\\ Changed line 323 from:
and looked up to find to:
and looked up to find\\ Changed line 325 from:
and crumpled to:
and crumpled\ Changed line 330 from:
you watching to:
you watching\\ Changed line 341 from:
in this broken desert to:
in this broken desert\\ Changed line 343 from:
of those who seek to:
of those who seek\\ Changed line 345 from:
strewn across this wasteland to:
strewn across this wasteland\\ Changed line 356 from:
i tried to pluck my life to:
i tried to pluck my life\\ Changed line 361 from:
gliding through the air to:
gliding through the air\\ Changed line 366 from:
and i gave her a little star to:
and i gave her a little star\\ Changed line 377 from:
to be sacrificed, to:
to be sacrificed,\\ Changed line 382 from:
all her fears flayed, to:
all her fears flayed,\\ Changed line 389 from:
and i dream of your bed, to:
and i dream of your bed,\\ Changed line 399 from:
this poison i need - to:
this poison i need -\\ Changed line 408 from:
Collide. to:
Collide.\\ Changed line 417 from:
The rush of humanity surrounding me. to:
The rush of humanity surrounding me.\\ Changed line 419 from:
They push past. to:
They push past.\\ Changed line 421 from:
Over. to:
Over.\\ Changed line 423 from:
Trampling. to:
Trampling.\\ Changed line 425 from:
An anomaly. to:
An anomaly.\\ Changed line 434 from:
Middle. to:
Middle.\\ Changed line 436 from:
They will all come in their time. to:
They will all come in their time.\\ Changed line 444 from:
drawing all into it. to:
drawing all into it.\\ Changed line 446 from:
Addicted, yet unable to staisfy the need. to:
Addicted, yet unable to staisfy the need.\\ Changed line 448 from:
Flickering, leaving the charred, gutted remains of the shell. to:
Flickering, leaving the charred, gutted remains of the shell.\\ Changed line 450 from:
Searching. to:
Searching.\\ Changed line 452 from:
It cannot fan its own flame. to:
It cannot fan its own flame.\\ Changed line 454 from:
Guilt. to:
Guilt.\\ Changed line 456 from:
or capable to:
or capable\\ Changed line 458 from:
A leech. to:
A leech.\\ Changed line 460 from:
Trying desperately to remember a time... to:
Trying desperately to remember a time...\\ Changed line 468 from:
exposing new wounds to:
exposing new wounds\\ Changed line 470 from:
and the secret it hides to:
and the secret it hides\\ Changed line 472 from:
sings neverwhen tunes to:
sings neverwhen tunes\\ Changed line 483 from:
beauty shrugs a lupine smile to:
beauty shrugs a lupine smile\\ Changed line 485 from:
but bravado simply laughs to:
but bravado simply laughs\\ Changed line 487 from:
and strides off into the sunset to:
and strides off into the sunset\\ Changed line 491 from:
kicked up to:
kicked up\\ Changed line 499 from:
the rain falls outside - to:
the rain falls outside -\\ Changed line 510 from:
to bring me joy and sadness - to:
to bring me joy and sadness -\\ Changed line 520 from:
you come into focus to:
you come into focus\\ Changed line 522 from:
i find myself (dancing) to:
i find myself (dancing)\\ Changed line 524 from:
(for you) to:
(for you)\\ Changed line 529 from:
but i am drawn to:
but i am drawn\\ Changed line 535 from:
this tainted euphoria to:
this tainted euphoria\\ |