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August 06, 2007, at 02:28 PM by 196.211.30.60 - fixing line breaks
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like black gore
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like black gore\\
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splatters
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splatters\\
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the birthing blood
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the birthing blood\\
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clotting
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clotting\\
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quivering viscera
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quivering viscera\\
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the grim midwife
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the grim midwife\\
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i am mechanic
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i am mechanic\\
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electron bleed
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electron bleed\\
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sectors corrupt
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sectors corrupt\\
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meltdown begins
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meltdown begins\\
Changed line 54 from:
to tell me your delusions
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to tell me your delusions\\
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lie to you so sweetly
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lie to you so sweetly\\
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that my illusions
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that my illusions\\
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your reality
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your reality\\
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that my conclusions
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that my conclusions\\
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i am hated
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i am hated\\
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incinerated
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incinerated\\
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segregated
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segregated\\
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subliminated
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subliminated\\
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(eliminated
to:
(eliminated\\
Changed line 84 from:
this blacklighted freakling
to:
this blacklighted freakling\\
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and different from you
to:
and different from you\\
Changed line 88 from:
at this small unique thing
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at this small unique thing\\
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this sparkling construction
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this sparkling construction\\
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cold and precise
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cold and precise\\
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intent on destruction
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intent on destruction\\
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this soulflesh delusion
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this soulflesh delusion\\
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so lost and abused
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so lost and abused\\
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deny this intrusion
to:
deny this intrusion\\
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as i prepare to thrash again
to:
as i prepare to thrash again\\
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and rage at the sun rising
to:
and rage at the sun rising\\
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as i prepare to fight again
to:
as i prepare to fight again\\
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and rage at the wrongs done to me
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and rage at the wrongs done to me\\
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as i prepare to create again
to:
as i prepare to create again\\
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and rage at the choices i must make
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and rage at the choices i must make \\
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with burning sugar
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with burning sugar\\
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in a heated bath
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in a heated bath\\
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loneliness walking
to:
loneliness walking\\
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i with bill in hand awake
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i with bill in hand awake\\
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echo through shattered skies
to:
echo through shattered skies\\
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tied to their marbled fists
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tied to their marbled fists\\
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scar bodies made of hay
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scar bodies made of hay\\
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Those thin blue veins just below the skin.
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Those thin blue veins just below the skin.\\
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Those scars on your wrists.
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Those scars on your wrists.\\
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Your eyes filled with such pain.
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Your eyes filled with such pain.\\
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You who sheds your pain with blood.
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You who sheds your pain with blood.\\
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Scalpel (my pen).
to:
Scalpel (my pen).\\
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It begins.
to:
It begins.\\
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Laid bare in their glory.
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Laid bare in their glory.\\
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For all to see.
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For all to see.\\
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Salt pearls of life.
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Salt pearls of life.\\
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A slip.
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A slip.\\
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A tear.
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A tear.\\
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Pumping to the rhythm of truth.
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Pumping to the rhythm of truth.\\
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Crawling.
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Crawling.\\
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Words appear.
to:
Words appear.\\
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Replaced by a silence.
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Replaced by a silence.\\
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dividing it into equal sections of sorrow.
to:
dividing it into equal sections of sorrow.\\
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through the windows there.
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through the windows there.\\
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but the mirror flings a grimace back at me.
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but the mirror flings a grimace back at me.\\
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crumbles
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crumbles\\
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falls.
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falls.\\
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engulfing me in its tide.
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engulfing me in its tide.\\
Changed line 255 from:
I look down,
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I look down,\\
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I reach down,
to:
I reach down,\\
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And piece by piece
to:
And piece by piece\\
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I look up and my reflection
to:
I look up and my reflection\\
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I smile,
to:
I smile,\\
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to the glory of that smile.
to:
to the glory of that smile.\\
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Fuck it all to hell.
to:
Fuck it all to hell.\\
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Drain Blouberg strand.
to:
Drain Blouberg strand.\\
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Turn your back on the ill fated rand.
to:
Turn your back on the ill fated rand.\\
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Trust not the stranger.
to:
Trust not the stranger.\
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I put my faith in people.
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I put my faith in people.\\
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I loved this goddamn country.
to:
I loved this goddamn country.\\
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Drain Blouberg strand.
to:
Drain Blouberg strand.\\
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And turn your back on the ill fated rand.
to:
And turn your back on the ill fated rand.\\
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Trust not the steeple
to:
Trust not the steeple\\
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The rainbow nations tarnished.
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The rainbow nations tarnished.\\
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The thieves are all smiling.
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The thieves are all smiling.\\
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Drain Blouberg strand.
to:
Drain Blouberg strand.\\
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And turn your back on the ill fated rand.
to:
And turn your back on the ill fated rand.\\
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you watching
to:
you watching\\
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between two heartbeats
to:
between two heartbeats\\
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and looked up to find
to:
and looked up to find\\
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and crumpled
to:
and crumpled\
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you watching
to:
you watching\\
Changed line 341 from:
in this broken desert
to:
in this broken desert\\
Changed line 343 from:
of those who seek
to:
of those who seek\\
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strewn across this wasteland
to:
strewn across this wasteland\\
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i tried to pluck my life
to:
i tried to pluck my life\\
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gliding through the air
to:
gliding through the air\\
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and i gave her a little star
to:
and i gave her a little star\\
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to be sacrificed,
to:
to be sacrificed,\\
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all her fears flayed,
to:
all her fears flayed,\\
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and i dream of your bed,
to:
and i dream of your bed,\\
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this poison i need -
to:
this poison i need -\\
Changed line 408 from:
Collide.
to:
Collide.\\
Changed line 417 from:
The rush of humanity surrounding me.
to:
The rush of humanity surrounding me.\\
Changed line 419 from:
They push past.
to:
They push past.\\
Changed line 421 from:
Over.
to:
Over.\\
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Trampling.
to:
Trampling.\\
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An anomaly.
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An anomaly.\\
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Middle.
to:
Middle.\\
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They will all come in their time.
to:
They will all come in their time.\\
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drawing all into it.
to:
drawing all into it.\\
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Addicted, yet unable to staisfy the need.
to:
Addicted, yet unable to staisfy the need.\\
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Flickering, leaving the charred, gutted remains of the shell.
to:
Flickering, leaving the charred, gutted remains of the shell.\\
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Searching.
to:
Searching.\\
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It cannot fan its own flame.
to:
It cannot fan its own flame.\\
Changed line 454 from:
Guilt.
to:
Guilt.\\
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or capable
to:
or capable\\
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A leech.
to:
A leech.\\
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Trying desperately to remember a time...
to:
Trying desperately to remember a time...\\
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exposing new wounds
to:
exposing new wounds\\
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and the secret it hides
to:
and the secret it hides\\
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sings neverwhen tunes
to:
sings neverwhen tunes\\
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beauty shrugs a lupine smile
to:
beauty shrugs a lupine smile\\
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but bravado simply laughs
to:
but bravado simply laughs\\
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and strides off into the sunset
to:
and strides off into the sunset\\
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kicked up
to:
kicked up\\
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the rain falls outside -
to:
the rain falls outside -\\
Changed line 510 from:
to bring me joy and sadness -
to:
to bring me joy and sadness -\\
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you come into focus
to:
you come into focus\\
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i find myself (dancing)
to:
i find myself (dancing)\\
Changed line 524 from:
(for you)
to:
(for you)\\
Changed line 529 from:
but i am drawn
to:
but i am drawn\\
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this tainted euphoria
to:
this tainted euphoria\\
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