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        by  - fixing line breaks Changed line 9 from: like black  to: like black gore\\ Changed line 11 from: to: splatters\\ Changed line 13 from: the birthing  to: the birthing blood\\ Changed line 15 from: to: clotting\\ Changed line 17 from: quivering  to: quivering viscera\\ Changed line 21 from: the grim  to: the grim midwife\\ Changed line 31 from: i am  to: i am mechanic\\ Changed line 36 from: electron  to: electron bleed\\ Changed line 41 from: sectors  to: sectors corrupt\\ Changed line 46 from: meltdown  to: meltdown begins\\ Changed line 54 from: to tell me your  to: to tell me your delusions\\ Changed line 56 from: lie to you so  to: lie to you so sweetly\\ Changed line 58 from: that my  to: that my illusions\\ Changed line 60 from: your  to: your reality\\ Changed line 62 from: that my  to: that my conclusions\\ Changed line 69 from: i am  to: i am hated\\ Changed line 71 from: to: incinerated\\ Changed line 73 from: to: segregated\\ Changed line 75 from: to: subliminated\\ Changed line 77 from: ( to: (eliminated\\ Changed line 84 from: this blacklighted  to: this blacklighted freakling\\ Changed line 86 from: and different from  to: and different from you\\ Changed line 88 from: at this small unique  to: at this small unique thing\\ Changed line 93 from: this sparkling  to: this sparkling construction\\ Changed line 95 from: cold and  to: cold and precise\\ Changed line 97 from: intent on  to: intent on destruction\\ Changed line 102 from: this soulflesh  to: this soulflesh delusion\\ Changed line 104 from: so lost and  to: so lost and abused\\ Changed line 106 from: deny this  to: deny this intrusion\\ Changed line 117 from: as i prepare to thrash  to: as i prepare to thrash again\\ Changed line 119 from: and rage at the sun  to: and rage at the sun rising\\ Changed line 123 from: as i prepare to fight  to: as i prepare to fight again\\ Changed line 125 from: and rage at the wrongs done to  to: and rage at the wrongs done to me\\ Changed line 129 from: as i prepare to create  to: as i prepare to create again\\ Changed line 131 from: and rage at the choices i must make  to: and rage at the choices i must make \\ Changed line 143 from: with burning  to: with burning sugar\\ Changed line 147 from: in a heated  to: in a heated bath\\ Changed line 152 from: loneliness  to: loneliness walking\\ Changed line 154 from: i with bill in hand  to: i with bill in hand awake\\ Changed line 164 from: echo through shattered  to: echo through shattered skies\\ Changed line 169 from: tied to their marbled  to: tied to their marbled fists\\ Changed line 174 from: scar bodies made of  to: scar bodies made of hay\\ Changed line 185 from: Those thin blue veins just below the skin. to: Those thin blue veins just below the skin.\\ Changed line 190 from: Those scars on your wrists. to: Those scars on your wrists.\\ Changed line 195 from: Your eyes filled with such pain. to: Your eyes filled with such pain.\\ Changed line 201 from: You who sheds your pain with blood. to: You who sheds your pain with blood.\\ Changed line 212 from: Scalpel (my pen). to: Scalpel (my pen).\\ Changed line 214 from: It begins. to: It begins.\\ Changed line 216 from: Laid bare in their glory. to: Laid bare in their glory.\\ Changed line 218 from: For all to see. to: For all to see.\\ Changed line 220 from: Salt pearls of life. to: Salt pearls of life.\\ Changed line 222 from: A slip. to: A slip.\\ Changed line 224 from: A tear. to: A tear.\\ Changed line 226 from: Pumping to the rhythm of truth. to: Pumping to the rhythm of truth.\\ Changed line 228 from: Crawling. to: Crawling.\\ Changed line 230 from: Words appear. to: Words appear.\\ Changed line 232 from: Replaced by a silence. to: Replaced by a silence.\\ Changed line 241 from: dividing it into equal sections of sorrow. to: dividing it into equal sections of sorrow.\\ Changed line 243 from: through the windows there. to: through the windows there.\\ Changed line 245 from: but the mirror flings a grimace back at me. to: but the mirror flings a grimace back at me.\\ Changed line 247 from: to: crumbles\\ Changed line 249 from: falls. to: falls.\\ Changed line 251 from: engulfing me in its tide. to: engulfing me in its tide.\\ Changed line 255 from: I look down, to: I look down,\\ Changed line 257 from: I reach down, to: I reach down,\\ Changed line 259 from: And piece by  to: And piece by piece\\ Changed line 264 from: I look up and my  to: I look up and my reflection\\ Changed line 266 from: I smile, to: I smile,\\ Changed line 268 from: to the glory of that smile. to: to the glory of that smile.\\ Changed line 279 from: Fuck it all to hell. to: Fuck it all to hell.\\ Changed line 281 from: Drain Blouberg strand. to: Drain Blouberg strand.\\ Changed line 283 from: Turn your back on the ill fated rand. to: Turn your back on the ill fated rand.\\ Changed line 285 from: Trust not the stranger. to: Trust not the stranger.\ Changed line 287 from: I put my faith in people. to: I put my faith in people.\\ Changed line 289 from: I loved this goddamn country. to: I loved this goddamn country.\\ Changed line 293 from: Drain Blouberg strand. to: Drain Blouberg strand.\\ Changed line 295 from: And turn your back on the ill fated rand. to: And turn your back on the ill fated rand.\\ Changed line 297 from: Trust not the  to: Trust not the steeple\\ Changed line 299 from: The rainbow nations tarnished. to: The rainbow nations tarnished.\\ Changed line 301 from: The thieves are all smiling. to: The thieves are all smiling.\\ Changed line 305 from: Drain Blouberg strand. to: Drain Blouberg strand.\\ Changed line 307 from: And turn your back on the ill fated rand. to: And turn your back on the ill fated rand.\\ Changed line 316 from: you  to: you watching\\ Changed line 318 from: between two  to: between two heartbeats\\ Changed line 323 from: and looked up to  to: and looked up to find\\ Changed line 325 from: and  to: and crumpled\ Changed line 330 from: you  to: you watching\\ Changed line 341 from: in this broken  to: in this broken desert\\ Changed line 343 from: of those who  to: of those who seek\\ Changed line 345 from: strewn across this  to: strewn across this wasteland\\ Changed line 356 from: i tried to pluck my  to: i tried to pluck my life\\ Changed line 361 from: gliding through the  to: gliding through the air\\ Changed line 366 from: and i gave her a little  to: and i gave her a little star\\ Changed line 377 from: to be sacrificed, to: to be sacrificed,\\ Changed line 382 from: all her fears flayed, to: all her fears flayed,\\ Changed line 389 from: and i dream of your bed, to: and i dream of your bed,\\ Changed line 399 from: this poison i need - to: this poison i need -\\ Changed line 408 from: Collide. to: Collide.\\ Changed line 417 from: The rush of humanity surrounding me. to: The rush of humanity surrounding me.\\ Changed line 419 from: They push past. to: They push past.\\ Changed line 421 from: Over. to: Over.\\ Changed line 423 from: Trampling. to: Trampling.\\ Changed line 425 from: An anomaly. to: An anomaly.\\ Changed line 434 from: Middle. to: Middle.\\ Changed line 436 from: They will all come in their time. to: They will all come in their time.\\ Changed line 444 from: drawing all into it. to: drawing all into it.\\ Changed line 446 from: Addicted, yet unable to staisfy the need. to: Addicted, yet unable to staisfy the need.\\ Changed line 448 from: Flickering, leaving the charred, gutted remains of the shell. to: Flickering, leaving the charred, gutted remains of the shell.\\ Changed line 450 from: Searching. to: Searching.\\ Changed line 452 from: It cannot fan its own flame. to: It cannot fan its own flame.\\ Changed line 454 from: Guilt. to: Guilt.\\ Changed line 456 from: or  to: or capable\\ Changed line 458 from: A leech. to: A leech.\\ Changed line 460 from: Trying desperately to remember a time... to: Trying desperately to remember a time...\\ Changed line 468 from: exposing new  to: exposing new wounds\\ Changed line 470 from: and the secret it  to: and the secret it hides\\ Changed line 472 from: sings neverwhen  to: sings neverwhen tunes\\ Changed line 483 from: beauty shrugs a lupine  to: beauty shrugs a lupine smile\\ Changed line 485 from: but bravado simply  to: but bravado simply laughs\\ Changed line 487 from: and strides off into the  to: and strides off into the sunset\\ Changed line 491 from: kicked  to: kicked up\\ Changed line 499 from: the rain falls outside - to: the rain falls outside -\\ Changed line 510 from: to bring me joy and sadness - to: to bring me joy and sadness -\\ Changed line 520 from: you come into  to: you come into focus\\ Changed line 522 from: i find myself (dancing) to: i find myself (dancing)\\ Changed line 524 from: (for you) to: (for you)\\ Changed line 529 from: but i am  to: but i am drawn\\ Changed line 535 from: this tainted  to: this tainted euphoria\\ |