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        by  - fixing line breaks Changed line 10 from: The whims and  to: The whims and wants\\ Changed line 12 from: When he sees the  to: When he sees the paths\\ Changed line 16 from: For whom the pain and the  to: For whom the pain and the shame\\ Changed line 18 from: Lessons learned (can) so easily (be)  to: Lessons learned (can) so easily (be) forgotten\\ Changed line 20 from: Blame the  to: Blame the Heart\\ Changed line 24 from: You are Disfigured,  to: You are Disfigured, Disguised\\ Changed line 34 from: Thick,  to: Thick, throbbing\\ Changed line 36 from: Wending,  to: Wending, winding\\ Changed line 38 from: Deeper,  to: Deeper, deeper\\ Changed line 42 from: A cosy  to: A cosy cave\\ Changed line 48 from: In cold  to: In cold air\\ Changed line 63 from: in frozen  to: in frozen fire\\ Changed line 65 from: before i was  to: before i was born\\ Changed line 67 from: scatters stellar  to: scatters stellar graves\\ Changed line 69 from: and the  to: and the litany\\ Changed line 74 from: alone beneath the  to: alone beneath the sky\\ Changed line 76 from: at chaos  to: at chaos unrivalled\\ Changed line 78 from: to: undeniable\\ Changed line 80 from: if  to: if i\\ Changed line 82 from: were not  to: were not infinitely\\ Changed line 92 from: Raven  to: Raven Priestess\\ Changed line 97 from: in ravaged  to: in ravaged black\\ Changed line 102 from: Night  to: Night Goddess\\ Changed line 107 from: to: exsanguination\\ Changed line 112 from: Dark  to: Dark Druidess\\ Changed line 123 from: Like the bleeding brine of  to: Like the bleeding brine of tears\\ Changed line 128 from: While above me storms still  to: While above me storms still rage\\ Changed line 133 from: Beyond the boundless  to: Beyond the boundless blue\\ Changed line 147 from: Deep within  to: Deep within you\\ Changed line 149 from: I see it when you smile at  to: I see it when you smile at me\\ Changed line 153 from: That calls me to love  to: That calls me to love you\\ Changed line 155 from: It only serves to  to: It only serves to enhance\\ Changed line 165 from: So your dreamy eyes fade  to: So your dreamy eyes fade away\\ Changed line 169 from: They greedily devour me  to: They greedily devour me whole\\ Changed line 173 from: It astonishes me  to: It astonishes me how\\ Changed line 177 from: Look at me I shrivel up and  to: Look at me I shrivel up and die\\ Changed line 185 from: that scar my  to: that scar my cheeks\\ Changed line 187 from: my soul has  to: my soul has aged\\ Changed line 189 from: and shatters as i  to: and shatters as i turn\\ Changed line 191 from: to hide my  to: to hide my pain\\ Changed line 193 from: and sighs of  to: and sighs of nevermore\\ Changed line 195 from: despairs that  to: despairs that i\\ Changed line 205 from: crawls beneath my shadow-shattered  to: crawls beneath my shadow-shattered skin\\ Changed line 207 from: fragments of liquid silver  to: fragments of liquid silver starstuff\\ Changed line 209 from: of my scattered  to: of my scattered soul\\ Changed line 211 from: drawing  to: drawing bloodbreathlessness\\ Changed line 213 from: the masochistic  to: the masochistic ecstacy\\ Changed line 215 from: screaming my  to: screaming my sorrow\\ Changed line 227 from: Rocking in your  to: Rocking in your bed\\ Changed line 229 from: Your mommy's almost  to: Your mommy's almost dead\\ Changed line 231 from: And death within her  to: And death within her eyes\\ Changed line 242 from: Chest Heaving, Cheeks  to: Chest Heaving, Cheeks flushed\\ Changed line 244 from: Gyrate Baby, Baby  to: Gyrate Baby, Baby Thrust\\ Changed line 246 from: Heat Baby, Baby  to: Heat Baby, Baby Death\\ Changed line 257 from: Aching Jesus, your true cause is  to: Aching Jesus, your true cause is lost\\ Changed line 262 from: Your true purpose hidden with what's been  to: Your true purpose hidden with what's been adorned\\ Changed line 264 from: Beneath your hard  to: Beneath your hard stare\\ Changed line 275 from: you (don't) love  to: you (don't) love me\\ Changed line 277 from: with your hands on my  to: with your hands on my shoulders\\ Changed line 279 from: in mocking- to: in mocking-friendly\\ Changed line 292 from: inside  to: inside you\\ Changed line 294 from: (so warm) to: (so warm)\\ Changed line 299 from: slew  to: slew me\\ Changed line 303 from: i  to: i know\\ Changed line 305 from: that your sadness will draw  to: that your sadness will draw me\\ Changed line 318 from: i drove alone down that road- to: i drove alone down that road-\\ Changed line 328 from: How gracefully you graze upon the green. to: How gracefully you graze upon the green.\\ Changed line 333 from: While, lost in thought, you stand and ruminate. to: While, lost in thought, you stand and ruminate.\\ Changed line 338 from: No tasty steak, no pasta bolognaise, to: No tasty steak, no pasta bolognaise,\\ Changed line 352 from: With myriad lights a- to: With myriad lights a-glowing\\ Changed line 354 from: Beneath his feet, the beasts of  to: Beneath his feet, the beasts of chrome\\ Changed line 358 from: His concrete heart is beating. to: His concrete heart is beating.\\ Changed line 360 from: Winks red, green, amber in the night. to: Winks red, green, amber in the night.\\ Changed line 364 from: To the titan's earnest query. to: To the titan's earnest query.\\ Changed line 366 from: The metal maid his love has  to: The metal maid his love has spurned\\ Changed line 375 from: of the fear of death  to: of the fear of death denied\\ Changed line 380 from: bones to dust and ash to  to: bones to dust and ash to flame\\ Changed line 385 from: fighting wars their fathers  to: fighting wars their fathers lead\\ Changed line 396 from: Her sugar-plum tresses are wet from the rain. to: Her sugar-plum tresses are wet from the rain.\\ Changed line 398 from: Her teeth are all gone, to: Her teeth are all gone,\\ Changed line 400 from: They sucked out her tongue. to: They sucked out her tongue.\\ Changed line 402 from: Or that she is beat, to: Or that she is beat,\\ Changed line 412 from: i catch a  to: i catch a glimpse\\ Changed line 414 from: of spent  to: of spent tears\\ Changed line 416 from: bears the scars of her  to: bears the scars of her despair\\ Changed line 418 from: the bitter-mo(u)rning  to: the bitter-mo(u)rning aftertaste\\ Changed line 420 from: and  to: and you\\ Changed line 422 from: yet i  to: yet i laugh\\ Changed line 434 from: high  to: high tide\\ Changed line 436 from: to: neverwhen\\ Changed line 438 from: leave the past and take the vow  to: leave the past and take the vow \\ Changed line 440 from: mother,  to: mother, crone\\ Changed line 442 from: dragondancer  to: dragondancer \\ Changed line 444 from: close your eyes and turn the  to: close your eyes and turn the page\\ Changed line 446 from: demon's  to: demon's lair\\ Changed line 448 from: real to  to: real to her\\ Changed line 458 from: deathstill silence -  to: deathstill silence - \\ Changed line 460 from: pregnant with the sound  to: pregnant with the sound \\ Changed line 463 from: a smoky rose unfolds -  to: a smoky rose unfolds - \\ Changed line 465 from: reaches after fleeing dark;  to: reaches after fleeing dark; \\ Changed line 468 from: Cerberus roars -  to: Cerberus roars - \\ Changed line 470 from: fast on the heels of silence  to: fast on the heels of silence \\ Changed line 473 from: liquid fire blasts -  to: liquid fire blasts - \\ Changed line 475 from: Mephistopheles justified:  to: Mephistopheles justified: \\ Changed line 478 from: (a baby chuckles -  to: (a baby chuckles - \\ Changed line 480 from: lifts his face to the dying light  to: lifts his face to the dying light \\ Changed line 490 from: a voice  to: a voice whispers\\ Changed line 492 from: and my heart  to: and my heart sighs\\ Changed line 494 from: i have stood in this  to: i have stood in this place\\ Changed line 496 from: (always the same; to: (always the same;\\ Changed line 501 from: so climb down off your  to: so climb down off your cross\\ Changed line 516 from: devourer of souls? to: devourer of souls?\\ Changed line 518 from: and gnashing of teeth, to: and gnashing of teeth,\\ Changed line 520 from: and sulphur  to: and sulphur burning\\ Changed line 525 from: in black  to: in black leather\\ Changed line 527 from: to  to: to reveal\\ Changed line 538 from: through submarine pseudo- to: through submarine pseudo-lives\\ Changed line 543 from: drift  to: drift away\\ Changed line 545 from: only to see it  to: only to see it burst\\ Changed line 555 from: through the nib of your  to: through the nib of your pen\\ Changed line 557 from: on mass-production  to: on mass-production paper\\ Changed line 559 from: screams a measure of your  to: screams a measure of your pain\\ Changed line 561 from: how blue ink can  to: how blue ink can convey\\ Changed line 570 from: and settles down around me; to: and settles down around me;\\ Changed line 572 from: in a roadside  to: in a roadside cafe\\ Changed line 574 from: with a fallen  to: with a fallen angel\\ Changed line 576 from: a guy in a leather coat and  to: a guy in a leather coat and sandals\\ Changed line 578 from: and the mountain is chuckling in the  to: and the mountain is chuckling in the background\\ Changed line 580 from: but the music's still  to: but the music's still playing\\ Changed line 592 from: watchtowers  to: watchtowers named\\ Changed line 594 from: to: circleworking\\ Changed line 598 from: spells the  to: spells the charge\\ Changed line 600 from: named and  to: named and called\\ Changed line 604 from: the coven  to: the coven invokes\\ Changed line 606 from: deity  to: deity manifests\\ Changed line 610 from: in faerie  to: in faerie light\\ Changed line 612 from: virgin, mother,  to: virgin, mother, crone\\ Changed line 616 from: at tantric  to: at tantric touch\\ Changed line 618 from: to: skyclad\\ Changed line 628 from: (g)loom  to: (g)loom overhead\\ Changed line 630 from: with thunderandlightning  to: with thunderandlightning threats\\ Changed line 632 from: pinkandwhite almond  to: pinkandwhite almond blossoms\\ |