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But lose my soul to:
But lose my soul\\ Changed line 101 from:
My Lust to:
My Lust\\ Changed line 105 from:
My will to fight to:
My will to fight\\ Changed line 110 from:
My brain overloads to:
My brain overloads\\ Changed line 114 from:
I look to the past to:
I look to the past\\ Changed line 116 from:
Forgetting my spirit to:
Forgetting my spirit\\ Changed line 121 from:
In a rut to:
In a rut\\ Changed line 123 from:
In a mixed up, too-sensible to:
In a mixed up, too-sensible\\ Changed line 134 from:
held hand and heart to:
held hand and heart\\ Changed line 138 from:
in soul (and safe) to:
in soul (and safe)\\ Changed line 142 from:
with wrapped attention to:
with wrapped attention\\ Changed line 146 from:
lost life and love to:
lost life and love\\ Changed line 150 from:
a gift for you to:
a gift for you\\ Changed line 160 from:
Sitting quietly to:
Sitting quietly \\ Changed line 162 from:
To sit quietly to:
To sit quietly \\ Changed line 166 from:
Incessant, nagging nothingness to:
Incessant, nagging nothingness \\ Changed line 177 from:
Sitting quietly to:
Sitting quietly \\ Changed line 185 from:
Silently its sleeping potential waits to:
Silently its sleeping potential waits \\ Changed line 190 from:
Gears slipping as torsion groans to:
Gears slipping as torsion groans\\ Changed line 195 from:
Piston pushing energy growing to:
Piston pushing energy growing\\ Changed line 200 from:
Violent shudder as chambers purge to:
Violent shudder as chambers purge\\ Changed line 207 from:
their swaying arms to:
their swaying arms\\ Changed line 209 from:
Shrouded in darkness. to:
Shrouded in darkness.\\ Changed line 211 from:
They cry out psalms to:
They cry out psalms\\ Changed line 213 from:
to the unseen. to:
to the unseen.\\ Changed line 215 from:
Filled with the power of to:
Filled with the power of\\ Changed line 217 from:
The universe calls them on. to:
The universe calls them on.\\ Changed line 219 from:
further. to:
further.\\ Changed line 221 from:
To touch. to:
To touch.\\ Changed line 223 from:
With the laying on of hands to:
With the laying on of hands\\ Changed line 225 from:
Charging the living energy to:
Charging the living energy\\ Changed line 227 from:
Blessed. to:
Blessed.\\ Changed line 229 from:
The power and to:
The power and\\ Changed line 231 from:
of that call. to:
of that call.\\ Changed line 237 from:
Intertwining carbon latticework to:
Intertwining carbon latticework\\ Changed line 239 from:
Twisting(ed) to:
Twisting(ed)\\ Changed line 241 from:
A petulant reminder of its occupant's to:
A petulant reminder of its occupant's\\ Changed line 243 from:
Tiny nickes. to:
Tiny nickes.\\ Changed line 245 from:
Life-giving crimson rivulets to:
Life-giving crimson rivulets\\ Changed line 247 from:
Blend. to:
Blend.\\ Changed line 249 from:
Driven on by the weakening pulse of the core. to:
Driven on by the weakening pulse of the core.\\ Changed line 251 from:
Sticky onto the hungry earth. to:
Sticky onto the hungry earth.\\ Changed line 263 from:
Among the twisted trees and razor spines to:
Among the twisted trees and razor spines\\ Changed line 268 from:
Would send the land into a panicked flight. to:
Would send the land into a panicked flight.\\ Changed lines 273-274 from:
They tell the history of a thousand years, Of fear and flame, of arbalests and spears - to:
They tell the history of a thousand years, Changed line 286 from:
there is fear to:
there is fear\\ Changed line 288 from:
and light to:
and light\\ Changed line 290 from:
and always to:
and always \\ Changed line 295 from:
there is beauty to:
there is beauty\\ Changed line 297 from:
and harshness to:
and harshness\\ Changed line 299 from:
and always to:
and always\\ Changed line 304 from:
there is safety to:
there is safety\\ Changed line 306 from:
and comfort to:
and comfort\\ Changed line 308 from:
and always to:
and always\\ Changed line 319 from:
back-warped to:
back-warped\\ Changed line 324 from:
black-wrapped to:
black-wrapped\\ Changed lines 338-339 from:
shatter my flesh with the needleblades and discreetly to:
shatter my flesh with the needleblades Changed lines 341-343 from:
i'll trade red for blue stitch my flesh with the memorystains and slowly to:
i'll trade red for blue Changed lines 345-347 from:
cover me in hope seal my flesh with the colourscars and finally to:
cover me in hope Changed line 358 from:
Slow jellied dams of life painting pretty pictures of memories of the floor. to:
Slow jellied dams of life painting pretty pictures of memories of the floor. \\ Changed line 360 from:
Floating over the ruins of his being. to:
Floating over the ruins of his being.\\ Changed line 378 from:
my body trembles to:
my body trembles\\ Changed line 383 from:
and my heart stutters to:
and my heart stutters\\ Changed line 388 from:
and soaked with sweat to:
and soaked with sweat\\ Changed line 393 from:
invades me now to:
invades me now\\ Changed line 407 from:
give in to convergency to:
give in to convergency\\ Changed line 412 from:
changes one's notion to:
changes one's notion\\ Changed line 417 from:
in worlds i've made to:
in worlds i've made\\ Changed line 422 from:
unavoidable singularity to:
unavoidable singularity\\ Changed line 431 from:
screaming to the heavens to:
screaming to the heavens\\ Changed line 433 from:
shattering on the skies to:
shattering on the skies\\ Changed line 435 from:
upon my naked body to:
upon my naked body\\ Changed line 437 from:
eternally searching to:
eternally searching\\ Changed line 447 from:
waiting to:
waiting\\ Changed line 449 from:
waiting waiting waiting to:
waiting waiting waiting\\ Changed line 451 from:
for the secrets that whisper to:
for the secrets that whisper\\ Changed line 453 from:
clenching to:
clenching\\ Changed line 455 from:
quaking to:
quaking\\ Changed line 457 from:
from what's outside to:
from what's outside\\ Changed line 465 from:
explosive rush to:
explosive rush\\ Changed line 467 from:
born from darkness to:
born from darkness\\ Changed line 471 from:
eternal fight to:
eternal fight\\ Changed line 473 from:
born from fire to:
born from fire\\ Changed line 477 from:
dying scars to:
dying scars\\ Changed line 479 from:
born from power to:
born from power\\ Changed line 483 from:
addictive caress to:
addictive caress\\ Changed line 485 from:
born from love to:
born from love\\ Changed line 493 from:
stabbing fragments to:
stabbing fragments\\ Changed line 495 from:
this pustulent sore to:
this pustulent sore\\ Changed line 497 from:
into the healing brine to:
into the healing brine\\ Changed line 499 from:
congesting arteries to:
congesting arteries\\ Changed line 501 from:
this tortured body to:
this tortured body\\ Changed line 503 from:
opening for the knife to:
opening for the knife\\ Changed line 505 from:
rising up to:
rising up\\ Changed line 507 from:
this barren mother to:
this barren mother\\ Changed line 509 from:
clutching me to her withered breast to:
clutching me to her withered breast\\ |