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August 06, 2007, at 01:06 PM by 196.211.30.60 - fixing line breaks
Changed line 99 from:

But lose my soul

to:

But lose my soul\\

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My Lust

to:

My Lust\\

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My will to fight

to:

My will to fight\\

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My brain overloads

to:

My brain overloads\\

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I look to the past

to:

I look to the past\\

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Forgetting my spirit

to:

Forgetting my spirit\\

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In a rut

to:

In a rut\\

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In a mixed up, too-sensible

to:

In a mixed up, too-sensible\\

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held hand and heart

to:

held hand and heart\\

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in soul (and safe)

to:

in soul (and safe)\\

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with wrapped attention

to:

with wrapped attention\\

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lost life and love

to:

lost life and love\\

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a gift for you

to:

a gift for you\\

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Sitting quietly

to:

Sitting quietly \\

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To sit quietly

to:

To sit quietly \\

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Incessant, nagging nothingness

to:

Incessant, nagging nothingness \\

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Sitting quietly

to:

Sitting quietly \\

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Silently its sleeping potential waits

to:

Silently its sleeping potential waits \\

Changed line 190 from:

Gears slipping as torsion groans

to:

Gears slipping as torsion groans\\

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Piston pushing energy growing

to:

Piston pushing energy growing\\

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Violent shudder as chambers purge

to:

Violent shudder as chambers purge\\

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their swaying arms

to:

their swaying arms\\

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Shrouded in darkness.

to:

Shrouded in darkness.\\

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They cry out psalms

to:

They cry out psalms\\

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to the unseen.

to:

to the unseen.\\

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Filled with the power of

to:

Filled with the power of\\

Changed line 217 from:

The universe calls them on.

to:

The universe calls them on.\\

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further.

to:

further.\\

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To touch.

to:

To touch.\\

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With the laying on of hands

to:

With the laying on of hands\\

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Charging the living energy

to:

Charging the living energy\\

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Blessed.

to:

Blessed.\\

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The power and

to:

The power and\\

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of that call.

to:

of that call.\\

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Intertwining carbon latticework

to:

Intertwining carbon latticework\\

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Twisting(ed)

to:

Twisting(ed)\\

Changed line 241 from:

A petulant reminder of its occupant's

to:

A petulant reminder of its occupant's\\

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Tiny nickes.

to:

Tiny nickes.\\

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Life-giving crimson rivulets

to:

Life-giving crimson rivulets\\

Changed line 247 from:

Blend.

to:

Blend.\\

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Driven on by the weakening pulse of the core.

to:

Driven on by the weakening pulse of the core.\\

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Sticky onto the hungry earth.

to:

Sticky onto the hungry earth.\\

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Among the twisted trees and razor spines

to:

Among the twisted trees and razor spines\\

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Would send the land into a panicked flight.

to:

Would send the land into a panicked flight.\\

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They tell the history of a thousand years, Of fear and flame, of arbalests and spears -

to:

They tell the history of a thousand years,
Of fear and flame, of arbalests and spears -\\

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there is fear

to:

there is fear\\

Changed line 288 from:

and light

to:

and light\\

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and always

to:

and always \\

Changed line 295 from:

there is beauty

to:

there is beauty\\

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and harshness

to:

and harshness\\

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and always

to:

and always\\

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there is safety

to:

there is safety\\

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and comfort

to:

and comfort\\

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and always

to:

and always\\

Changed line 319 from:

back-warped

to:

back-warped\\

Changed line 324 from:

black-wrapped

to:

black-wrapped\\

Changed lines 338-339 from:

shatter my flesh with the needleblades

   and discreetly
to:

shatter my flesh with the needleblades
and discreetly\\

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i'll trade red for blue stitch my flesh with the memorystains

   and slowly
to:

i'll trade red for blue
stitch my flesh with the memorystains
and slowly\\

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cover me in hope seal my flesh with the colourscars

   and finally
to:

cover me in hope
seal my flesh with the colourscars
and finally\\

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Slow jellied dams of life painting pretty pictures of memories of the floor.

to:

Slow jellied dams of life painting pretty pictures of memories of the floor. \\

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Floating over the ruins of his being.

to:

Floating over the ruins of his being.\\

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my body trembles

to:

my body trembles\\

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and my heart stutters

to:

and my heart stutters\\

Changed line 388 from:

and soaked with sweat

to:

and soaked with sweat\\

Changed line 393 from:

invades me now

to:

invades me now\\

Changed line 407 from:

give in to convergency

to:

give in to convergency\\

Changed line 412 from:

changes one's notion

to:

changes one's notion\\

Changed line 417 from:

in worlds i've made

to:

in worlds i've made\\

Changed line 422 from:

unavoidable singularity

to:

unavoidable singularity\\

Changed line 431 from:

screaming to the heavens

to:

screaming to the heavens\\

Changed line 433 from:

shattering on the skies

to:

shattering on the skies\\

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upon my naked body

to:

upon my naked body\\

Changed line 437 from:

eternally searching

to:

eternally searching\\

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waiting

to:

waiting\\

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waiting waiting waiting

to:

waiting waiting waiting\\

Changed line 451 from:

for the secrets that whisper

to:

for the secrets that whisper\\

Changed line 453 from:

clenching

to:

clenching\\

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quaking

to:

quaking\\

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from what's outside

to:

from what's outside\\

Changed line 465 from:

explosive rush

to:

explosive rush\\

Changed line 467 from:

born from darkness

to:

born from darkness\\

Changed line 471 from:

eternal fight

to:

eternal fight\\

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born from fire

to:

born from fire\\

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dying scars

to:

dying scars\\

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born from power

to:

born from power\\

Changed line 483 from:

addictive caress

to:

addictive caress\\

Changed line 485 from:

born from love

to:

born from love\\

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stabbing fragments

to:

stabbing fragments\\

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this pustulent sore

to:

this pustulent sore\\

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into the healing brine

to:

into the healing brine\\

Changed line 499 from:

congesting arteries

to:

congesting arteries\\

Changed line 501 from:

this tortured body

to:

this tortured body\\

Changed line 503 from:

opening for the knife

to:

opening for the knife\\

Changed line 505 from:

rising up

to:

rising up\\

Changed line 507 from:

this barren mother

to:

this barren mother\\

Changed line 509 from:

clutching me to her withered breast

to:

clutching me to her withered breast\\

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