| TheTome / MoonFlakesPoetryCornerTheTome.MoonFlakesPoetryCorner HistoryHide minor edits - Show changes to output August 06, 2007, at 01:06 PM
        by  - fixing line breaks Changed line 99 from: But lose my  to: But lose my soul\\ Changed line 101 from: My  to: My Lust\\ Changed line 105 from: My will to  to: My will to fight\\ Changed line 110 from: My brain  to: My brain overloads\\ Changed line 114 from: I look to the  to: I look to the past\\ Changed line 116 from: Forgetting my  to: Forgetting my spirit\\ Changed line 121 from: In a  to: In a rut\\ Changed line 123 from: In a mixed up, too- to: In a mixed up, too-sensible\\ Changed line 134 from: held hand and  to: held hand and heart\\ Changed line 138 from: in soul (and safe) to: in soul (and safe)\\ Changed line 142 from: with wrapped  to: with wrapped attention\\ Changed line 146 from: lost life and  to: lost life and love\\ Changed line 150 from: a gift for  to: a gift for you\\ Changed line 160 from: Sitting quietly  to: Sitting quietly \\ Changed line 162 from: To sit quietly  to: To sit quietly \\ Changed line 166 from: Incessant, nagging nothingness  to: Incessant, nagging nothingness \\ Changed line 177 from: Sitting quietly  to: Sitting quietly \\ Changed line 185 from: Silently its sleeping potential waits  to: Silently its sleeping potential waits \\ Changed line 190 from: Gears slipping  as torsion  to: Gears slipping  as torsion groans\\ Changed line 195 from: Piston pushing energy  to: Piston pushing energy growing\\ Changed line 200 from: Violent shudder as chambers  to: Violent shudder as chambers purge\\ Changed line 207 from: their swaying  to: their swaying arms\\ Changed line 209 from: Shrouded in darkness. to: Shrouded in darkness.\\ Changed line 211 from: They cry out  to: They cry out psalms\\ Changed line 213 from: to the unseen. to: to the unseen.\\ Changed line 215 from: Filled with the power  to: Filled with the power of\\ Changed line 217 from: The universe calls them on. to: The universe calls them on.\\ Changed line 219 from: further. to: further.\\ Changed line 221 from: To touch. to: To touch.\\ Changed line 223 from: With the laying on of  to: With the laying on of hands\\ Changed line 225 from: Charging the living  to: Charging the living energy\\ Changed line 227 from: Blessed. to: Blessed.\\ Changed line 229 from: The power  to: The power and\\ Changed line 231 from: of that call. to: of that call.\\ Changed line 237 from: Intertwining carbon  to: Intertwining carbon latticework\\ Changed line 239 from: Twisting(ed) to: Twisting(ed)\\ Changed line 241 from: A petulant reminder of its occupant' to: A petulant reminder of its occupant's\\ Changed line 243 from: Tiny nickes. to: Tiny nickes.\\ Changed line 245 from: Life-giving crimson  to: Life-giving crimson rivulets\\ Changed line 247 from: Blend. to: Blend.\\ Changed line 249 from: Driven on by the weakening pulse of the core. to: Driven on by the weakening pulse of the core.\\ Changed line 251 from: Sticky onto the hungry earth. to: Sticky onto the hungry earth.\\ Changed line 263 from: Among the twisted trees and razor  to: Among the twisted trees and razor spines\\ Changed line 268 from: Would send the land into a panicked flight. to: Would send the land into a panicked flight.\\ Changed lines 273-274 from: They tell the history of a thousand years, Of fear and flame, of arbalests and spears - to: They tell the history of a thousand years,\\ Of fear and flame, of arbalests and spears -\\ Changed line 286 from: there is  to: there is fear\\ Changed line 288 from: and  to: and light\\ Changed line 290 from: and always  to: and always \\ Changed line 295 from: there is  to: there is beauty\\ Changed line 297 from: and  to: and harshness\\ Changed line 299 from: and  to: and always\\ Changed line 304 from: there is  to: there is safety\\ Changed line 306 from: and  to: and comfort\\ Changed line 308 from: and  to: and always\\ Changed line 319 from: back- to: back-warped\\ Changed line 324 from: black- to: black-wrapped\\ Changed lines 338-339 from: shatter my flesh with the needleblades to: shatter my flesh with the needleblades\\ and discreetly\\ Changed lines 341-343 from: i'll trade red for blue stitch my flesh with the memorystains to: i'll trade red for blue\\ stitch my flesh with the memorystains\\ and slowly\\ Changed lines 345-347 from: cover me in hope seal my flesh with the colourscars to: cover me in hope\\ seal my flesh with the colourscars\\ and finally\\ Changed line 358 from: Slow jellied dams of life painting pretty pictures of memories of the floor.  to: Slow jellied dams of life painting pretty pictures of memories of the floor. \\ Changed line 360 from: Floating over the ruins of his being. to: Floating over the ruins of his being.\\ Changed line 378 from: my body  to: my body trembles\\ Changed line 383 from: and my heart  to: and my heart stutters\\ Changed line 388 from: and soaked with  to: and soaked with sweat\\ Changed line 393 from: invades me  to: invades me now\\ Changed line 407 from: give in to  to: give in to convergency\\ Changed line 412 from: changes one's  to: changes one's notion\\ Changed line 417 from: in worlds i've  to: in worlds i've made\\ Changed line 422 from: unavoidable  to: unavoidable singularity\\ Changed line 431 from: screaming to the  to: screaming to the heavens\\ Changed line 433 from: shattering on the  to: shattering on the skies\\ Changed line 435 from: upon my naked  to: upon my naked body\\ Changed line 437 from: eternally  to: eternally searching\\ Changed line 447 from: to: waiting\\ Changed line 449 from: waiting waiting  to: waiting waiting waiting\\ Changed line 451 from: for the secrets that  to: for the secrets that whisper\\ Changed line 453 from: to: clenching\\ Changed line 455 from: to: quaking\\ Changed line 457 from: from what's  to: from what's outside\\ Changed line 465 from: explosive  to: explosive rush\\ Changed line 467 from: born from  to: born from darkness\\ Changed line 471 from: eternal  to: eternal fight\\ Changed line 473 from: born from  to: born from fire\\ Changed line 477 from: dying  to: dying scars\\ Changed line 479 from: born from  to: born from power\\ Changed line 483 from: addictive  to: addictive caress\\ Changed line 485 from: born from  to: born from love\\ Changed line 493 from: stabbing  to: stabbing fragments\\ Changed line 495 from: this pustulent  to: this pustulent sore\\ Changed line 497 from: into the healing  to: into the healing brine\\ Changed line 499 from: congesting  to: congesting arteries\\ Changed line 501 from: this tortured  to: this tortured body\\ Changed line 503 from: opening for the  to: opening for the knife\\ Changed line 505 from: rising  to: rising up\\ Changed line 507 from: this barren  to: this barren mother\\ Changed line 509 from: clutching me to her withered  to: clutching me to her withered breast\\ |