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August 06, 2007, at 01:06 PM by 196.211.30.60 - fixing line breaks
Changed line 99 from:
But lose my soul
to:
But lose my soul\\
Changed line 101 from:
My Lust
to:
My Lust\\
Changed line 105 from:
My will to fight
to:
My will to fight\\
Changed line 110 from:
My brain overloads
to:
My brain overloads\\
Changed line 114 from:
I look to the past
to:
I look to the past\\
Changed line 116 from:
Forgetting my spirit
to:
Forgetting my spirit\\
Changed line 121 from:
In a rut
to:
In a rut\\
Changed line 123 from:
In a mixed up, too-sensible
to:
In a mixed up, too-sensible\\
Changed line 134 from:
held hand and heart
to:
held hand and heart\\
Changed line 138 from:
in soul (and safe)
to:
in soul (and safe)\\
Changed line 142 from:
with wrapped attention
to:
with wrapped attention\\
Changed line 146 from:
lost life and love
to:
lost life and love\\
Changed line 150 from:
a gift for you
to:
a gift for you\\
Changed line 160 from:
Sitting quietly
to:
Sitting quietly \\
Changed line 162 from:
To sit quietly
to:
To sit quietly \\
Changed line 166 from:
Incessant, nagging nothingness
to:
Incessant, nagging nothingness \\
Changed line 177 from:
Sitting quietly
to:
Sitting quietly \\
Changed line 185 from:
Silently its sleeping potential waits
to:
Silently its sleeping potential waits \\
Changed line 190 from:
Gears slipping  as torsion groans
to:
Gears slipping  as torsion groans\\
Changed line 195 from:
Piston pushing energy growing
to:
Piston pushing energy growing\\
Changed line 200 from:
Violent shudder as chambers purge
to:
Violent shudder as chambers purge\\
Changed line 207 from:
their swaying arms
to:
their swaying arms\\
Changed line 209 from:
Shrouded in darkness.
to:
Shrouded in darkness.\\
Changed line 211 from:
They cry out psalms
to:
They cry out psalms\\
Changed line 213 from:
to the unseen.
to:
to the unseen.\\
Changed line 215 from:
Filled with the power of
to:
Filled with the power of\\
Changed line 217 from:
The universe calls them on.
to:
The universe calls them on.\\
Changed line 219 from:
further.
to:
further.\\
Changed line 221 from:
To touch.
to:
To touch.\\
Changed line 223 from:
With the laying on of hands
to:
With the laying on of hands\\
Changed line 225 from:
Charging the living energy
to:
Charging the living energy\\
Changed line 227 from:
Blessed.
to:
Blessed.\\
Changed line 229 from:
The power and
to:
The power and\\
Changed line 231 from:
of that call.
to:
of that call.\\
Changed line 237 from:
Intertwining carbon latticework
to:
Intertwining carbon latticework\\
Changed line 239 from:
Twisting(ed)
to:
Twisting(ed)\\
Changed line 241 from:
A petulant reminder of its occupant's
to:
A petulant reminder of its occupant's\\
Changed line 243 from:
Tiny nickes.
to:
Tiny nickes.\\
Changed line 245 from:
Life-giving crimson rivulets
to:
Life-giving crimson rivulets\\
Changed line 247 from:
Blend.
to:
Blend.\\
Changed line 249 from:
Driven on by the weakening pulse of the core.
to:
Driven on by the weakening pulse of the core.\\
Changed line 251 from:
Sticky onto the hungry earth.
to:
Sticky onto the hungry earth.\\
Changed line 263 from:
Among the twisted trees and razor spines
to:
Among the twisted trees and razor spines\\
Changed line 268 from:
Would send the land into a panicked flight.
to:
Would send the land into a panicked flight.\\
Changed lines 273-274 from:
They tell the history of a thousand years,
Of fear and flame, of arbalests and spears -
to:
They tell the history of a thousand years,\\
Of fear and flame, of arbalests and spears -\\
Changed line 286 from:
there is fear
to:
there is fear\\
Changed line 288 from:
and light
to:
and light\\
Changed line 290 from:
and always
to:
and always \\
Changed line 295 from:
there is beauty
to:
there is beauty\\
Changed line 297 from:
and harshness
to:
and harshness\\
Changed line 299 from:
and always
to:
and always\\
Changed line 304 from:
there is safety
to:
there is safety\\
Changed line 306 from:
and comfort
to:
and comfort\\
Changed line 308 from:
and always
to:
and always\\
Changed line 319 from:
back-warped
to:
back-warped\\
Changed line 324 from:
black-wrapped
to:
black-wrapped\\
Changed lines 338-339 from:
shatter my flesh with the needleblades
  and discreetly
to:
shatter my flesh with the needleblades\\
  and discreetly\\
Changed lines 341-343 from:
i'll trade red for blue
stitch my flesh with the memorystains
  and slowly
to:
i'll trade red for blue\\
stitch my flesh with the memorystains\\
  and slowly\\
Changed lines 345-347 from:
cover me in hope
seal my flesh with the colourscars
  and finally
to:
cover me in hope\\
seal my flesh with the colourscars\\
  and finally\\
Changed line 358 from:
Slow jellied dams of life painting pretty pictures of memories of the floor.
to:
Slow jellied dams of life painting pretty pictures of memories of the floor. \\
Changed line 360 from:
Floating over the ruins of his being.
to:
Floating over the ruins of his being.\\
Changed line 378 from:
my body trembles
to:
my body trembles\\
Changed line 383 from:
and my heart stutters
to:
and my heart stutters\\
Changed line 388 from:
and soaked with sweat
to:
and soaked with sweat\\
Changed line 393 from:
invades me now
to:
invades me now\\
Changed line 407 from:
give in to convergency
to:
give in to convergency\\
Changed line 412 from:
changes one's notion
to:
changes one's notion\\
Changed line 417 from:
in worlds i've made
to:
in worlds i've made\\
Changed line 422 from:
unavoidable singularity
to:
unavoidable singularity\\
Changed line 431 from:
screaming to the heavens
to:
screaming to the heavens\\
Changed line 433 from:
shattering on the skies
to:
shattering on the skies\\
Changed line 435 from:
upon my naked body
to:
upon my naked body\\
Changed line 437 from:
eternally searching
to:
eternally searching\\
Changed line 447 from:
waiting
to:
waiting\\
Changed line 449 from:
waiting waiting waiting
to:
waiting waiting waiting\\
Changed line 451 from:
for the secrets that whisper
to:
for the secrets that whisper\\
Changed line 453 from:
clenching
to:
clenching\\
Changed line 455 from:
quaking
to:
quaking\\
Changed line 457 from:
from what's outside
to:
from what's outside\\
Changed line 465 from:
explosive rush
to:
explosive rush\\
Changed line 467 from:
born from darkness
to:
born from darkness\\
Changed line 471 from:
eternal fight
to:
eternal fight\\
Changed line 473 from:
born from fire
to:
born from fire\\
Changed line 477 from:
dying scars
to:
dying scars\\
Changed line 479 from:
born from power
to:
born from power\\
Changed line 483 from:
addictive caress
to:
addictive caress\\
Changed line 485 from:
born from love
to:
born from love\\
Changed line 493 from:
stabbing fragments
to:
stabbing fragments\\
Changed line 495 from:
this pustulent sore
to:
this pustulent sore\\
Changed line 497 from:
into the healing brine
to:
into the healing brine\\
Changed line 499 from:
congesting arteries
to:
congesting arteries\\
Changed line 501 from:
this tortured body
to:
this tortured body\\
Changed line 503 from:
opening for the knife
to:
opening for the knife\\
Changed line 505 from:
rising up
to:
rising up\\
Changed line 507 from:
this barren mother
to:
this barren mother\\
Changed line 509 from:
clutching me to her withered breast
to:
clutching me to her withered breast\\
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