| TheTome / MoonFlakesPoetryCornerTheTome.MoonFlakesPoetryCorner HistoryHide minor edits - Show changes to markup August 06, 2007, at 01:06 PM
        by  - fixing line breaks Changed line 99 from: But lose my soul to: But lose my soul\\ Changed line 101 from: My Lust to: My Lust\\ Changed line 105 from: My will to fight to: My will to fight\\ Changed line 110 from: My brain overloads to: My brain overloads\\ Changed line 114 from: I look to the past to: I look to the past\\ Changed line 116 from: Forgetting my spirit to: Forgetting my spirit\\ Changed line 121 from: In a rut to: In a rut\\ Changed line 123 from: In a mixed up, too-sensible to: In a mixed up, too-sensible\\ Changed line 134 from: held hand and heart to: held hand and heart\\ Changed line 138 from: in soul (and safe) to: in soul (and safe)\\ Changed line 142 from: with wrapped attention to: with wrapped attention\\ Changed line 146 from: lost life and love to: lost life and love\\ Changed line 150 from: a gift for you to: a gift for you\\ Changed line 160 from: Sitting quietly to: Sitting quietly \\ Changed line 162 from: To sit quietly to: To sit quietly \\ Changed line 166 from: Incessant, nagging nothingness to: Incessant, nagging nothingness \\ Changed line 177 from: Sitting quietly to: Sitting quietly \\ Changed line 185 from: Silently its sleeping potential waits to: Silently its sleeping potential waits \\ Changed line 190 from: Gears slipping as torsion groans to: Gears slipping as torsion groans\\ Changed line 195 from: Piston pushing energy growing to: Piston pushing energy growing\\ Changed line 200 from: Violent shudder as chambers purge to: Violent shudder as chambers purge\\ Changed line 207 from: their swaying arms to: their swaying arms\\ Changed line 209 from: Shrouded in darkness. to: Shrouded in darkness.\\ Changed line 211 from: They cry out psalms to: They cry out psalms\\ Changed line 213 from: to the unseen. to: to the unseen.\\ Changed line 215 from: Filled with the power of to: Filled with the power of\\ Changed line 217 from: The universe calls them on. to: The universe calls them on.\\ Changed line 219 from: further. to: further.\\ Changed line 221 from: To touch. to: To touch.\\ Changed line 223 from: With the laying on of hands to: With the laying on of hands\\ Changed line 225 from: Charging the living energy to: Charging the living energy\\ Changed line 227 from: Blessed. to: Blessed.\\ Changed line 229 from: The power and to: The power and\\ Changed line 231 from: of that call. to: of that call.\\ Changed line 237 from: Intertwining carbon latticework to: Intertwining carbon latticework\\ Changed line 239 from: Twisting(ed) to: Twisting(ed)\\ Changed line 241 from: A petulant reminder of its occupant's to: A petulant reminder of its occupant's\\ Changed line 243 from: Tiny nickes. to: Tiny nickes.\\ Changed line 245 from: Life-giving crimson rivulets to: Life-giving crimson rivulets\\ Changed line 247 from: Blend. to: Blend.\\ Changed line 249 from: Driven on by the weakening pulse of the core. to: Driven on by the weakening pulse of the core.\\ Changed line 251 from: Sticky onto the hungry earth. to: Sticky onto the hungry earth.\\ Changed line 263 from: Among the twisted trees and razor spines to: Among the twisted trees and razor spines\\ Changed line 268 from: Would send the land into a panicked flight. to: Would send the land into a panicked flight.\\ Changed lines 273-274 from: They tell the history of a thousand years, Of fear and flame, of arbalests and spears - to: They tell the history of a thousand years, Changed line 286 from: there is fear to: there is fear\\ Changed line 288 from: and light to: and light\\ Changed line 290 from: and always to: and always \\ Changed line 295 from: there is beauty to: there is beauty\\ Changed line 297 from: and harshness to: and harshness\\ Changed line 299 from: and always to: and always\\ Changed line 304 from: there is safety to: there is safety\\ Changed line 306 from: and comfort to: and comfort\\ Changed line 308 from: and always to: and always\\ Changed line 319 from: back-warped to: back-warped\\ Changed line 324 from: black-wrapped to: black-wrapped\\ Changed lines 338-339 from: shatter my flesh with the needleblades and discreetly to: shatter my flesh with the needleblades Changed lines 341-343 from: i'll trade red for blue stitch my flesh with the memorystains and slowly to: i'll trade red for blue Changed lines 345-347 from: cover me in hope seal my flesh with the colourscars and finally to: cover me in hope Changed line 358 from: Slow jellied dams of life painting pretty pictures of memories of the floor. to: Slow jellied dams of life painting pretty pictures of memories of the floor. \\ Changed line 360 from: Floating over the ruins of his being. to: Floating over the ruins of his being.\\ Changed line 378 from: my body trembles to: my body trembles\\ Changed line 383 from: and my heart stutters to: and my heart stutters\\ Changed line 388 from: and soaked with sweat to: and soaked with sweat\\ Changed line 393 from: invades me now to: invades me now\\ Changed line 407 from: give in to convergency to: give in to convergency\\ Changed line 412 from: changes one's notion to: changes one's notion\\ Changed line 417 from: in worlds i've made to: in worlds i've made\\ Changed line 422 from: unavoidable singularity to: unavoidable singularity\\ Changed line 431 from: screaming to the heavens to: screaming to the heavens\\ Changed line 433 from: shattering on the skies to: shattering on the skies\\ Changed line 435 from: upon my naked body to: upon my naked body\\ Changed line 437 from: eternally searching to: eternally searching\\ Changed line 447 from: waiting to: waiting\\ Changed line 449 from: waiting waiting waiting to: waiting waiting waiting\\ Changed line 451 from: for the secrets that whisper to: for the secrets that whisper\\ Changed line 453 from: clenching to: clenching\\ Changed line 455 from: quaking to: quaking\\ Changed line 457 from: from what's outside to: from what's outside\\ Changed line 465 from: explosive rush to: explosive rush\\ Changed line 467 from: born from darkness to: born from darkness\\ Changed line 471 from: eternal fight to: eternal fight\\ Changed line 473 from: born from fire to: born from fire\\ Changed line 477 from: dying scars to: dying scars\\ Changed line 479 from: born from power to: born from power\\ Changed line 483 from: addictive caress to: addictive caress\\ Changed line 485 from: born from love to: born from love\\ Changed line 493 from: stabbing fragments to: stabbing fragments\\ Changed line 495 from: this pustulent sore to: this pustulent sore\\ Changed line 497 from: into the healing brine to: into the healing brine\\ Changed line 499 from: congesting arteries to: congesting arteries\\ Changed line 501 from: this tortured body to: this tortured body\\ Changed line 503 from: opening for the knife to: opening for the knife\\ Changed line 505 from: rising up to: rising up\\ Changed line 507 from: this barren mother to: this barren mother\\ Changed line 509 from: clutching me to her withered breast to: clutching me to her withered breast\\ |